Story time: The girl behind closed doors

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Illustration by Aamnah Arshad
Illustration by Aamnah Arshad

In a far-off village in the mountains, where traditions ruled and people’s rights were often compromised, even within their own families, lived an unfortunate girl who dreamt of learning.

Her name was Zarmeen. She was 15. Her older brother, Saad, studied in the city and lived in a hostel. He was educated — his mind unbound by the traditional and societal chains that often silenced basic rights. There was hope in him, a quiet promise that he would not let his sister grow up voiceless. He would give her what she truly deserved: books to ignite her mind, ideas to shape her world, and a voice to claim her place in it.

But when it was time to turn her dream into reality, a storm started to brew — a storm of whispers that grew into the loud, disapproving voices of the elders.

A jirga, the meeting for the village elders, was called. White beards nodded in solemn agreement. Angry eyes burned with judgement. The decision was made by the elders of the village.

“Saad has finished his studies, so he must join his father to work on his land, while his sister can never attend any school. She will remain inside the house and will do the household chores.”

Zarmeen’s mother, who had spent her life under the same rules, said nothing. She felt her daughter’s pain, but her lips stayed sealed. Saad brought with him a bundle of books from the city, so he gave those to his sister and promised her that he would teach her, since he was home now.

When her father was out in the fields and she had finished helping her mother, Zarmeen would quietly sneak into her room to read. Sometimes, her brother Saad would slip in to teach her. Days turned into weeks, and he kept bringing her books — hiding them from the world, even from their own father. Saad made sure she studied everything he believed would help his little sister gain an education and become enlightened.

And Zarmeen, tucked away from the outside world, began unlocking door after door inside her mind. Her small, dim room slowly transformed into a world full of light. Time passed. She was no longer just a girl — she had grown into a quiet storm of knowledge.

Then, one day, her mother fell seriously ill. A high fever burnt through her body, and she lay weak, unable to move or speak. The men of the house gathered outside, concerned but hesitant.

“We must take her to a doctor in the city,” one of them said.

“But it’s hours away,” another replied. “By the time we get there…”

Then, from the doorway, came a quiet voice.

It was Zarmeen. “Can I try? I’ve read about these symptoms... I think I can help her.”

The room fell silent. Could this be real?

Zarmeen went to her shelf and took out a small notebook — one she had carefully filled with handwritten notes from old medical texts and herbal medicine books her brother had given her. She gathered some herbs, some more ingredients from the kitchen, and made a simple tonic.

All night, she stayed by her mother’s side, cooling her, making her sip the tonic, checking her pulse just like she had read. By morning, her mother’s fever broke. Her breathing eased. She opened her eyes slowly.

Just then her father entered and was surprised to see her: “You did this, Zarmeen?” he asked.

Zarmeen nodded.

Her father sat by her side, took her hand, eyes brimming with tears.

“I kept you hidden from the world,” he whispered, “and you became the light that saved my wife — your mother! You are not just my daughter; you are a healer.”

That day, her father stood tall, finding the courage to speak up for his daughter. For by keeping silent, he had nearly lost more than just his pride; he had almost extinguished her light before it could shine.

In the next village meeting, Zarmeen’s father stood up and spoke:

“Do not stop your daughters. They are your strength. They can save your life. They can protect your honour. Educating girls is educating the whole nation.”

Published in Dawn, Young World, July 19th, 2025

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